George Blackman: YouTube Sciptwriter

We'll review your YouTube script and give detailed feedback on how it can be tightened to improve performance. You will receive: 1/ My team's detailed notes on the script from a structural and visual standpoint, including recommendations for: The Hook.Use of B-Roll.StorytellingPacingCTA 2/ An accompanying Loom sharing our findings. Our credentials: I developed an engagement-driven approach to scriptwriting while writing for creators like Ali Abdaal (5m subscribers), Mike Shake (3m), Noah Kagan (500k) and Creator Booth (35k). The videos I've written have a combined 25,000,000 views.My small, handpicked team of scriptwriters have written and overseen scripts for industry names like ConvertKit. I only work with people I trust and stake my reputation on their output.They'll combine their own experience and time spent working closely with me to help you create more engaging YouTube scripts. This is for you if... You create YouTube videos between 2-15 minutes long.You want to write videos that keep people watching for longer.You lack structure when you sit down to write a script. This is NOT for you if... You create long-form YouTube videos (e.g. podcasts, livestreams).You want a full channel audit. Delivery We don't rush these reviews, so delivery can take up to 7 working days.

🚀 Learn strategies to keep people watching your videos for longer. Study the successes and failures of other videos to make yours better, faster. 🧠 See what worked for others… and what didn’t. Tired of guessing why people clicked away? Want to understand more about audience habits, pacing and storytelling?The Retention Hub collects dozens of retention graphs and lets you filter by niche, views, retention problem, average view duration (%) and more.This is the fastest way to supercharge your understanding of video retention to keep people watching you for longer. "Not only do George's retention analyses serve as fascinating windows into other content niches but they help me understand how I can tell better, more compelling stories." - Justin Moore, Creator Wizard Founder ⚡️ Stop people clicking away. Find actionable takeaways specific to your niche in seconds.Each video can be viewed in summary, so you can understand the most important info at a glance.While there are no “rules” when it comes to YouTube, there are certainly patterns.The more time you spend learning those patterns, the better chance you have of improving audience retention.🎥 Avoid the common mistakes To create videos people want to watch for longer, you need to understand why they click away.That’s why The Retention Hub mainly features data from small-to-medium sized channels.By studying the most common mistakes, you can ensure your next video avoids the same traps.While I often feature comparisons to more successful videos, this is not a collection of flatline, 80% retention graphs. 👁 Create more engaging content. Every single video comes with a full-length review.You can expand each graph to see my long-form thoughts on each piece of content, such as: What worked.What to improve.Similar case studies.Actionable takeaways. ✍️ Real reviews, zero AI. Your retention graph represents the opinions of real people.That’s why each video is watched, re-watched, studied and broken down by a real person - me! 👋I’ve worked with exciting YouTubers like Ali Abdaal and Mike Shake as a video scriptwriter and my videos have had millions of views - I want to pass on what I’ve learned to you.Every single video in this database has been meticulously assessed by me, so you get authentic opinions and thoughtful suggestions to improve video retention. "Thank you for the retention graph review. We implemented it into a video and saw immediate results." - Breakout Cards, 10k subscribers. Featured in The Retention Hub. 📈 A Growing Resource. When you invest in The Retention Hub, you gain lifetime access.So no matter how many graphs I add, you won’t pay a penny more.This is a long-term investment, but with up-front benefits.Start learning today, with the knowledge the database will gradually continue to expand. 👋 Who am I?My name's George Blackman and I'm a consulting YouTube scriptwriter.I’ve written scripts for creators like Mike Shake (3m subs) and Ali Abdaal (4m subs). I write a weekly scriptwriting newsletter ready by 2000+ creators.💰 One-time payment; no surprises. Get lifetime access, no matter how many new graphs I add. 👇 FAQs Who is The Retention Hub for?This database is designed for creators who want to improve audience retention on their YouTube videos.This database is a collection of retention graphs from YouTubers of various sizes and is designed for you to be able to gain knowledge, understanding and inspiration from the successes and failures of other videos.What happens when I purchase The Retention Hub?You’ll be given the option to download a short PDF, which features the link to the database and provides instructions on how to access it.Seeing as The Retention Hub is a live database, I recommend accessing it via the link whenever you want to use it.You can duplicate it into your own Notion workspace, but new graphs that I add to the database won’t appear there.Do I need a Notion account to use The Retention Hub?You do not need a Notion account to use The Retention Hub.But, if you wish, you can create a free account here.How can I get my graph featured in The Retention Hub?You can submit one using this form! Although I receive many submissions so not all will be featured.How much does it cost?The Retention Hub costs $69.Are there recurring payments?Nope! Once you buy The Retention Hub, you have lifetime access (no matter how many new graphs I add).You get full access to it at whatever price you paid at the time.Can I get a refund?I offer refunds within 30 days of purchase, minus Paypal/Stripe fees.Keep in mind, this is a trust-based system seeing as you can’t technically “return” the database.But if you’re not satisfied with the purchase I’ll absolutely refund you.Can I share The Retention Hub with other people?Yes and no.If you work with more than one person on your YouTube channel or have started to build a team, you can absolutely share this resource with them.However, you can’t just share the link with anyone. This product is the result of hundreds of hours of work, and I trust my customers not to give it away to other people for free.How can I contact you?Easiest to contact me on Twitter!But you can also email me: [email protected] else do you offer?I have some other products and freebies available here.

Learn the systemized approach for writing more engaging YouTube scripts, faster. Overcome Decision Fatigue Through Systemized Process and Checklists Say goodbye to the overwhelming feeling of not knowing where to start. I’ll share systemised processes and comprehensive checklists to guide you through each step of creating a banger script, to simplify the decision-making on your plate and boost your efficiency. Enhance Your Script Quality for Better Viewer Retention I’ll share all of the insights I’ve gained from my thousands of hours of scriptwriting and 20,000,000+ views in the form of proven principles you can apply. You’ll get practical frameworks you can follow to ensure that your scripts aren’t just “good”, but that they’re optimised for viewer retention so you can keep your audience engaged from start to finish. Systemise Tailoring Scripts to Different Styles and Audiences I’ll give you customisable script templates and audience analysis tools for you to add to your arsenal. These are designed to be adaptable to your style and to your audience. The aim here is for you to be able to consistently capture the unique voice you’re writing in, while ensuring your scripts resonate with the people watching. Apply Everything Practically - And Learn From Practical Application As with anything in life, becoming an elite-level scriptwriter isn’t just about theory, it’s about putting what you learn into practise and iterating as you go. You’ll get access to a bunch of hands-on exercises and real world case studies from successful YouTubers to give you an inside look at what works and why - and sharing heaps of practical tools you can apply to your own scripts.

The "PRO" tier includes access to The YouTube Scriptwriter's Playbook, plus: Community Access: Year-long access to a community of creators and scriptwriters so you can learn from others, get support from some of the best creators on the platform and get feedback from an amazing network of people who are all trying to improve the same skills as you.Monthly office hours with me where you can share any difficulties you’re facing and I can help you work out solutions in real-time. You’ll also benefit from seeing the challenges other creators are facing and learning how we’d solve those, too.Guest sessions with amazing creators, like Ali Abdaal, Dodford and more. From experienced writers to creators at the top of their game, we’ll occasionally have guest sessions you can attend to further expand your knowledge of how the best approach their craft, and where you can ask specific questions to get more insight on how other creators would approach any challenges you’re facing. Courses: The Retention Hub - dozens of script reviews across 40+ niches to show you how to improve your videos and keep people watching for longer.